Comments for Screenplay Readers http://screenplayreaders.com Script coverage, screenplay analysis, and screenwriting resources Mon, 14 May 2012 20:10:01 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 Comment on Top 5 Bad Things Script Consultants Say About Script Coverage Which Aren’t True by Brian http://screenplayreaders.com/script-coverage/top-5-bad-things-script-consultants-say-about-script-coverage/#comment-635 Brian Mon, 14 May 2012 20:10:01 +0000 http://screenplayreaders.com/?p=1017#comment-635 Alain, Babz, I must've missed your comments somehow when they were originally posted! It took Kevin's comment above to make me check out this post again. My bad! Thanks for your input! I'm a scoundrel for not replying sooner. I agree wholeheartedly with your insights... It's indeed a Grand Canyon difference between 120 stacked pieces of paper and a sellable screenplay. So true, so true! Alain, Babz, I must’ve missed your comments somehow when they were originally posted! It took Kevin’s comment above to make me check out this post again. My bad! Thanks for your input! I’m a scoundrel for not replying sooner. I agree wholeheartedly with your insights… It’s indeed a Grand Canyon difference between 120 stacked pieces of paper and a sellable screenplay. So true, so true!

]]> Comment on Top 5 Bad Things Script Consultants Say About Script Coverage Which Aren’t True by Kevin Scott Ross http://screenplayreaders.com/script-coverage/top-5-bad-things-script-consultants-say-about-script-coverage/#comment-633 Kevin Scott Ross Sat, 12 May 2012 17:10:15 +0000 http://screenplayreaders.com/?p=1017#comment-633 Fascinating and insightful article. . . . . Fascinating and insightful article. . . . .

]]> Comment on Top 4 Reasons Why Screenwriters Need to Move to Los Angeles by Brian http://screenplayreaders.com/screenwriter-resources/top-4-reasons-why-screenwriters-need-to-move-to-los-angeles/#comment-621 Brian Mon, 23 Apr 2012 23:05:46 +0000 http://screenplayreaders.com/?p=1948#comment-621 Hi Stacy! Anything is possible, of course! But in my experience, I've found that the only thing that leads to success is total submersion. Hi Stacy! Anything is possible, of course! But in my experience, I’ve found that the only thing that leads to success is total submersion.

]]> Comment on First 10 Pages – Life In The Minors by S. Bralver by steve http://screenplayreaders.com/first-ten-pages/first-10-pages-life-in-the-minors-by-s-bralver/#comment-620 steve Sun, 22 Apr 2012 18:30:42 +0000 http://screenplayreaders.com/?p=1976#comment-620 **thank you for your time **thank you for your time

]]> Comment on First 10 Pages – Life In The Minors by S. Bralver by steve http://screenplayreaders.com/first-ten-pages/first-10-pages-life-in-the-minors-by-s-bralver/#comment-619 steve Sun, 22 Apr 2012 18:29:46 +0000 http://screenplayreaders.com/?p=1976#comment-619 gracias. that you for your time! gracias. that you for your time!

]]> Comment on Top 4 Reasons Why Screenwriters Need to Move to Los Angeles by Stacy Talus http://screenplayreaders.com/screenwriter-resources/top-4-reasons-why-screenwriters-need-to-move-to-los-angeles/#comment-618 Stacy Talus Sat, 21 Apr 2012 04:54:19 +0000 http://screenplayreaders.com/?p=1948#comment-618 Brian, So how about Portland, Oregon as a vibrant film community or rather... not that far away from L.A.? I can be in L.A. In a little more than an hour by plane. Mike Rich who wrote Finding Forrester, The Rookie, and Secretariat lives just down the road. Is Portland close enough to establish a career, or at least break in? Stacy Brian,

So how about Portland, Oregon as a vibrant film community or rather… not that far away from L.A.? I can be in L.A. In a little more than an hour by plane. Mike Rich who wrote Finding Forrester, The Rookie, and Secretariat lives just down the road. Is Portland close enough to establish a career, or at least break in?

Stacy

]]> Comment on First 10 Pages – Imminent Threat by J.W. Bryan by J W Bryan http://screenplayreaders.com/first-ten-pages/first-10-pages-imminent-threat-by-j-w-bryan/#comment-617 J W Bryan Sat, 21 Apr 2012 02:45:07 +0000 http://screenplayreaders.com/?p=1980#comment-617 Brian, Thanks for taking the time to read my first ten pages. I get what you are saying and will take it to heart. I appreciate your time and effort in helping make me a better writer. J.W. Bryan Brian,
Thanks for taking the time to read my first ten pages. I get what you are saying and will take it to heart. I appreciate your time and effort in helping make me a better writer.
J.W. Bryan

]]> Comment on First 10 Pages – Diva Exe by B. Szabo by Branden Szabo http://screenplayreaders.com/first-ten-pages/first-10-pages-diva-exe-by-b-szabo/#comment-616 Branden Szabo Fri, 20 Apr 2012 19:19:41 +0000 http://screenplayreaders.com/?p=1926#comment-616 Must have messed up the submission and forgotten my name. Thank you for taking the time on me, I hope more review sites offer services like this. Must have messed up the submission and forgotten my name. Thank you for taking the time on me, I hope more review sites offer services like this.

]]> Comment on First 10 Pages – Ally Stoker is a Smoker by M. Langman by Marshall http://screenplayreaders.com/first-ten-pages/first-10-pages-ally-stoker-is-a-smoker-by-m-langman/#comment-614 Marshall Tue, 17 Apr 2012 15:02:43 +0000 http://screenplayreaders.com/?p=1970#comment-614 .......I'll take it! Thank you Brian for putting in the time to read/review this. Much appreciated. I had a feeling about what I was doing wrong, and you're right. I'll work on raising the interesting-factor and condensing the material. As for the minor notes, I hadn't even noticed, but I'm glad you pointed them out. I'll start keeping an eye out for such things. Thanks again, M …….I’ll take it!

Thank you Brian for putting in the time to read/review this. Much appreciated.
I had a feeling about what I was doing wrong, and you’re right. I’ll work on raising the interesting-factor and condensing the material. As for the minor notes, I hadn’t even noticed, but I’m glad you pointed them out. I’ll start keeping an eye out for such things.

Thanks again,

M

]]> Comment on First 10 Pages – Jimmy Roosevelt by A. Hope by Andrew Hope http://screenplayreaders.com/first-ten-pages/first-10-pages-jimmy-roosevelt-by-a-hope/#comment-610 Andrew Hope Sat, 14 Apr 2012 15:33:47 +0000 http://screenplayreaders.com/?p=1961#comment-610 This is my screenplay - I guess the title page never came through! Anyway, thank you for the awesome review! Yes, there is a little cliche in there, but the pregnancy is not the focus of the story. I think that means my real hook which happens around page 17 really needs to start here. Again, thank you so much! Regards, Andrew Hope This is my screenplay – I guess the title page never came through! Anyway, thank you for the awesome review! Yes, there is a little cliche in there, but the pregnancy is not the focus of the story. I think that means my real hook which happens around page 17 really needs to start here.

Again, thank you so much!

Regards,

Andrew Hope

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